Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Response to BP Commercial

Here are the 5 types of argument I picked up on, and how effective I believe them to be: 

Arguments about the Past/Present/Future- The woman in this commercial continually expressed how BP was going to be there in the future up until the point that all of the oil is cleaned up from the gulf. I find this to be a tad ironic, because she acts so concerned, like this is such a huge project they're trying to put forth, and do good in the community, when in fact it was their fault the oil is there in the first place. I don't think this argument is very effective because the audience would most likely have the same initial thought in that it is almost their duty to clean up all of the oil, and not just something that looks good, or a project that others are proud to watch them do. 

Invitational Argument- There isn't necessarily a point where she asks you to respond to her questions, obviously, because it's a commercial, however they do put up a telephone number up, as well as websites throughout the length of the commercial where people can call in for information, or help, or questions. This is their own way of asking others to participate in the argument and get feedback, and possibly other peoples viewpoints. This argument can be seen as effective, because it effectively opens up this topic for discussion, aka an invitation, aka an invitational argument.

Arguments to Inform- There are certain facts that the woman in the commercial states simply to inform the audience of specific details. Such as: "We have 19 centers in 4 states", and "We've committed $20 billion in an independent claims fund to cover lost income until people impacted can get back to work." She even says that a sole purpose of the commercial is to inform. I think she was successful in making this argument effective, because I, for one, didn't know any of these actual facts, and I'm sure others thought these to be informative as well.

Arguments to Convince- The underlying theme of this commercial is to prove that BP is taking steps to improve the oil spill situation. The woman proposes the argument about restoring communities, the economy, and the environment to convince the audience that they are in fact taking this very seriously. She backs up all of her argument by giving examples of how they're trying to change things. This argument was effective, for the most part, because I truly do feel as though they're taking the necessary measures to make things better. The only thing that could by iffy is how long all of this should take.

Rogerian Argument- The speaker is using Rogerian Argument in a couple places in this commercial. The point of Rogerian argument is to find a common ground between the speaker and the audience, and to keep things non threatening. The woman talked about how she was working with shrimpers, fishermen, hotel workers, restaurant employees, and others to start solving problems to hopefully help the economic loss. I feel as though she's trying to evoke feelings from people that may watch this commercial that are a part of the industry that was effected by this, and in turn, they may feel as though she's reaching out to them specifically to help them with their problems. Also, at the end of the commercial, she talks about how she's from New Orleans, and how her family still lives there. My guess is she wants to find a common ground between her and those who may live along the gulf where this problem is severely effecting their lives. I feel as though this argument could be taken effectively if you are someone who she specifically reached out to, however I am not one of those people, and I still just think the whole BP situation is their fault and nothing more than that, therefore they should of course be doing everything they can to repair all the damage they've put forth.

In Class: Public Space Ideas

Although I'm not positive that this isn't my final choice, I'm pretty sure I'm going to write about Billybobs Texas, the world's largest honky tonk :) I go to Billybobs almost every Thursday, and try to make it to a concert on the weekend every once in a while. I absolutely love to country dance, and have gotten pretty good at it over the past year. Yes, I have been to this place a lot, and yes, of course I've picked up on certain details about the space, however I haven't been to Billybobs on nights like Tuesday, or Sunday. Nights that this place is still open, but I'm sure doesn't have near the same environment as I'm used to. I know I can pick up on more detail than I have in the past if I actually just sit and watch, instead of dancing the whole time, so I think that's what I'm going to do. Thursday nights is 'college night', which typically consists of way too many TCU students crowding themselves into the bar just to have an excuse to wear their $300 boots their parents bought them, which in turn, makes all of the regulars extremely annoyed that they have to share their dance space with the so-called beginners. On the weekends, there is a lot of mixed company, a lot more adults go on the weekends(okay, we're considered adults now, but I really mean age range 30+). On Thursdays, there is part live performance, and mostly music played by the DJ. However on the weekends, it's basically all live performance because these are the concert nights. I feel as though I can successfully write a paper about this, because it's a place I'm interested in, and won't mind going back more than once.

Thursday, August 26, 2010

In Class: The First Week of School

It's funny how things have changed so drastically from Middle School, or even High School to College. I used to look forward to class so much. Didn't have much of a problem waking up. Dressed up nice for school. Socialized as much as I needed to. Finished my homework the night it got assigned. You know the drill. However going into my second year of college(time flies, by the way), I find myself not looking forward to going to sit in a class, and listen to a professor talk for 80 minutes straight, while I sit there scrambling, taking notes. I don't wake up until literally 5 minutes before I need to walk out the door, throw on some Nike shorts and a t-shirt, you're lucky if I even touch my hair. The first week of classes, you get readings assigned, and packets, and test dates all flying at you, when all you really want to do is get accustomed to your new room, meet with all the friends you haven't seen all Summer, and sleep. 


I moved in last Saturday, and I already feel like I never left. I like my room a lot, having a big bed is really nice, much nicer than sharing a room last year. I have a bathroom and shower in my room this year, thank goodness. And I can control the thermostat whenever I please, just like a hotel! I switched my major from Pre-Med to Nursing this Summer, although you may think it could be a lot easier now, it isn't. The classes are going to be just as challenging, but I am more than excited to start taking things that will truly be related to my job field. And I can start right after I graduate :)


To be continued?....

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Introduction!

Hey Ya'll! I'm Allie Barnes, a sophomore Nursing major from Austin, Texas. I went to Round Rock High School, where my main thing was Volleyball, although I'll play absolutely any sport you throw me into. I'm in SGA here, more specifically a member of the house of representatives. If you need an extra person for an intramural team, call me, I'm in! I have a younger brother who just started his freshman year in college, two amazing parents, and quite a few pets :). My goal is to someday be an oncology nurse. I want to make people smile who don't think they have much to smile about. 


After completing this course, I am hoping I will feel even more comfortable writing lengthy papers, and being confident in what I write. Outside of writing papers for school, I write quite a bit. I'm sure we're all big time texters, and that doesn't change for me, I'm on my phone all the time, texting, writing emails, or writing reminders for myself throughout the day. Some of my guy friends are in the military/are going through boot camps, so I write to them, because that is the only form of communication they get. I am pretty comfortable writing, I've done it a lot, and I do it pretty well, or so I think. This class could prove me wrong. However I am open for suggestions, critiques, and ways for me to improve always!


I'm sure I'll change the layout of my blog 150 times, however, it will most likely always be pink, or some other kind of fun, bright color, because I feel like it matches my personality well. The font will never be in Times New Roman, I don't like going to the basic, or the normal thing. My picture, is black and white, because I love details you can pick up in black and white photos, and I'm smiling probably as big as I possibly can, because I love to smile, my parents paid a lot of money for these teeth! HA, anyways, I'm hoping I'm writing openly enough and friendly enough to where no one would have a problem commenting or saying hello! Nice to meet everyone!


Professor Irvin, I have read, understand, and agree to the terms of the course syllabus, which I see as a contract for our course. :)